Response to my word animation.

From the two responses that i recieved in class today I am really not surprised at all. i am really pleased with the satisfaction that people seemed to have with my ideas, and I am pleased to see that my plan and ideas were understood. I understand that some of the color choices made the viewing of piece a challenge and I also have come to understand that some of my motion tweens could have been slightly more fluid and easier to see. With more time I would like to perfect some of the tweens and adjust the timeline a bit. I would also very much like to expand on the poem itself and possibly incorporate actual pictures of real peonies/gardens. I would like to learn to be able to develop more fluid tweens, and shape tweens that do not dissappear-not sure why this kept happening. I would also like to view/learn more about poetic or story-telling expressions through the art of flash. Lastly, i think that more required development times/ stages imposed by the class or myself will help my pieces become more strong and have clear fluid ideas/poetic development throughout the peices.